This Week’s Writing // July 19th

This week we took a look at some specific grammar points such as the past tenses, as well as plural nouns. Students wrote their own unique pieces of writing then sat down and conferenced with their teacher to review what they had learned in the class. Let us know what you think below.

Colorful rain drops, By Ben Jeong

Yesterday, thunder started to roll and flashes to lightning lit up the sky. All around me were colorful raindrops of blue, green, and, red. However, I didn’t avoid that rain, and I just felt them. The raindrops were colorful and bright. I loved that rain and I was smiling during the rain. Soon, I got up. It was a dream. Then I need to get ready for today, but I was very angry.

Do you want why I was angry? I’ll tell you about me. My name is Jake. I’m 2grade in middle school student. Everybody think I have great time now. However, that’s wrong. I think my life is bored. All of the people make me tired. Everybody said “Study.”, “Do your homework.”, “You have lots of free time.” Why do all these people order me and make me angry and tired? I don’t know. So, every day my face is always bored or tired. Nobody saw my smile. Also I can’t remember my bright face. I was not interested in my life. I started my new day bored again.

However, surprisingly, I never had angry face today. When I was tired or bored, my dream which rained colorful raindrops appeared in my head and it made me smile. I don’t know, what that rain was, but it was true that it makes me happy.

One day, one thing which makes me happy came in my bored life. It gave energy to me. I am really surprised to something make me happy.

Pair of magic glasses, By Chloe Kim

I was digging around in my closet when I found a pair of magic glasses. There was a yellow post-it. That said “Be careful! these glasses are a scary thing.“ on the yellow post-it. I was thinking ‘It was not scary.’ So, I wore the pair of glasses. I surprised. I could see the future. I ran to my family. I saw family. I saw my family’s future. It was simple. the future is the same as now. It was boring. So, I thought of a good idea. ‘I would go to the mirror and wear the pair of magic glasses. Then I saw my future. ‘I thought about myself. So, I want to the mirror and saw my future. ‘I am not doing my homework so, every day I fight with my mom. I don’t have new friends!’ It was very scary. I threw the pair of magic glasses, and they broke. Oh no….! I was sad. But I wanted to stop the scary future. So, I will do my homework every day. I think I taught myself a lesson.

What’s the consequence?  By Jayden Jeon

Thunder started to roll, and flashes of lightning flickered around us. Suddenly colorful rain began to fall at night. People watched it and they were really surprised. Then, black snow fell to our city. It is extremely hot. The weather was so silly. The next day I went to my school. Outside was really hot, so I rode a bus. Then, the colorful rain came again. But, it’s not dirty. I played in the rain. The rain was delicious and cool. But, I think the rain was a little bit strange. I worried about it. I searched about colorful rain on the Internet. It’s kind related to global warming. We must stop it. So we rode a bus. It’s really tiring. I told my friends we should ride a bus. After 10years everything became simple.

My Dinner, by Stephanie Jeon

I am hungry. And my three dogs are too. First, I put four cups on the desk. And my two friends joined in my dinner. Oh, now I put two more cups on the desk. My three dogs want to eat meat and bacon. And my friends and I want to eat bread and three bottles of juice. We cooked eight slices of pizza, four loaves of bread, five bars of chocolate and three loaves meat. And i put five dishes and five cups. But my friend wants to a steak. So, I cooked the steak. “Please, pass me the salt.” I said. And my friend pass the salt to me. Now, I put an apple and an orange. we ate the food. After dinner, we were so full~!

My Strange Family, by Emily Kim

I was digging around in my closet when I found a pair of magic glasses. I wondered, ‘If wear the glasses, what will happen?’ So, I wore the glasses. And I got up from my room. I looked for my mom. My mom ate herself. So, I was surprised. I said “Mom! What are you doing?” Mom said “My body is sweet! Let me eat my body!” I thought, ‘My mom is strange….’ I went the to garden. I looked at my dad. My dad was playing with himself. So, I asked “May I play with you?” My dad said “No, I want to play alone. I like to play baseball alone.” I was sad. And I went to the living room. I looked for my sister and my dog, Pink. They cleaned their face themselves. So, I asked, “What are you doing?” My sister said, “My face is very dirty, So I am cleaning my face.” And Pink said “My face is dirty…” So, I was surprised. And I thought, ‘My family was very strange…’ I took of the magic glasses. In reality, my family wasn’t strange! I realized myself. When I wore the glasses, my family was strange, but when I took of the glasses, my family was not strange!

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